Forever Hold You

I sit and listen

As the rain hits the tin roof

And all I can do

Is think about you,

Where did you go

How long has it been

Before I will ever

See you again,

I'm dancing through life

Without a care

Because I'm hoping I make one move

And you'll be there,

Did I get my hopes up

Way too soon

As now I look

Down upon the moon,

Seems it took you way too long

And my life span

Had to move on,

I look down upon you

From where I am

Wondering how things would've been

I will never know

Because in my physical form

Next to you

I will never stand

But spiritually

I will forever hold your hand.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Sweet memory is all we have left sometimes.
"Because in my physical form
Next to you
I will never stand
But spiritually
I will forever hold your hand."
The above lines are true for many of us. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[wordman]

in my dreams you are mine in my dreams I can love you till the end of time
great write

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks for reviewing wordman

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Angad Waraich]

Beautifully written.
The last 5 lines were magical.
The way you look at love is amazing.
Has to be one of the best poems in this genre that i have read since joining.
Thank you for sharing.

[Tarry Franck]

I can't thank you enough for the compliment.

[stars are far]

wow thats very beautiful work it one of the best stuff i read, and those memories yes, i loved them.. well done

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you stars are far

[A Soap Mess Stories]

I feel you pain as I have waited 3 years for my guy to be here...hope you get your blessings...excellent Tarry

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Valerie and I wish us both the best. I've been looking for 4 years and just when I think I've found the right one something goes wrong...the story of my life...the roller coaster ride continues...

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Guess it's a test of our strength....

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

Beautiful Words. So Sad. It makes me Cry, Those feelings Are So familiar To me.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for reviewing Sarah - hope things get better for you soon.

[~Sarah~ Idríel The Fair]

Thanks, things are much better now days. I married my one true love after long ten years. =)

[Tarry Franck]

That's wonderful