Take My Life

Blackness is your soul

And you can capture mine

Half way or whole,

Not matter how long I fight

It's beyond my control

You can infiltrate my heart, my mind,

And I know you won't let go

Until you're satisfied

With your every being

Because you rule with your ego,

You will never set me free

Because that's not a part of you

You will never let me just be,

In bondage I remain

For we have been together for so long

My heart you will always gain,

It scares me at times

Because you rule me

And I believe I would let you take my life.

Reviews

[Purbleazaleya]

At times we love somebody so much, we are afraid of the amount of control they have over us. This is particularly the case when the person has an attitude problem and we are forced to just accept his behavior because we are afraid of losing them. Sad, but very true

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for reviewing

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful words for the emotion of love, control and need. I wonder can someone control us without knowing and touching? Thank you dear friend for sharing your excellent poetry.
Coyote

[A Soap Mess Stories]

I know how you feel when you've given your control to someone...great write...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena

[Chris Atkinson]

I can relate to this so much Tarry, its so hard but you have to say at some point enough is enough. When you love someone that much but they are hurting you and controlling you its hard to just walk away. but life is short and in my eyes a women and the person you love should be cherished and you should always make her feel special, not try to control her and make her feel blue. I feel for you because its a horrible situation to be in. you write about your feelings and emotions perfectly, I love your writing.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Chris