Elements Of Passion

Love the passion we have

It feels so good

Makes me want to walk that path

That path with you

Through good and bad,

Below the moon

Within the heat of the sun

May our passion

For each other run,

Run with the wind

Through the night air

Wild and free

May our feelings for one another

Seek whatever the elements send.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Love should be wild and free. I like the title. Create interest and possibilities. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[willweb]

Wonderful poem Tarry. So uplifting and happy. I enjoyed this today.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Eddie Phillips]

You have a great lead up to the final line and that makes this poem work perfectly. Great Job!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Eddie

[costa siwale]

I especially like how you connect the elements to love,
Its a fun piece this one

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Costa

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Passionate and fun...love the last two lines...

"May our feelings for one another
Seek whatever the elements send."

Excellently written...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena