Lose My Self

I want your hot body next to mine

Grinding nice and hard

Losing track of time,

In the moment of a great motion

I want you so bad

I want to swallow your potion,

You're the only one for me

On this majestic night

I want our bodies to feel free,

Freedom with passion that's out of control

And I want to lose my self with you

Mind, Body and Soul.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Maybe a mature statue for the poem. New W.C rules are in effect. You surprise me with the poem. I like the want and the need in the words. It is good when we are overcome with desire. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I'm always glad to see your name on the poetry board.

[Blue]

It's getting hot in here... ;)

[Tarry Franck]

LOL Thanks Arzel

[Linda alexander]

Excellent expressions, well penned, congrats

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Linda

[Linda alexander]

You welcome, take care

[Chris Atkinson]

excellent poem Tarry, you express your passion and desire perfectly. perfectly writen.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Chris

[A Soap Mess Stories]

A very erotic piece, full of passion and desire...excellent write.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena