Bondage

A prisoner in my own mind

Not sure where to go from here

My feelings are blind,

A sullen feeling has come over me

And know anytime soon

It will not set me free,

I feel a fire burning within

It's so hot I'm losing my soul

And don't really care

Because I no longer feel whole,

These feelings are not of shame

For I am not the one to blame

So in bondage I remain.

Reviews

[Lover Of Words]

I know how tough things are for you right now but i know on the inside that you can find the strength to pull though this you are an magical woman who deserves only the best go out and find my friend because it is out there in the form of something unexpected

[Tarry Franck]

I know I can too. I just have to keep the faith and when I get down this far fight it as much as I can. Not let it consume me.

[Lover Of Words]

No dont let it consume you it does not deserve to win the battle... Let me tell you something you are the strongest woman on the planet and i know you have it in you to pull yourself up granted i know how hard it is but you are very powerful in yourself and when ever you need i will be right by your side

[Coyote Poetry]

Many kind of bondage. Some are self imposed and some are forced. I like the strong description. Making the words come alive and strong. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Wow! We must have a connection. . .you've captured my feelings entirely. . .great write. . .

[Tarry Franck]

We've always had a connection. Maybe we need to exchange emails so we can get to know each other better and figure out what's going on between us because this has been going on for a long time.

[Anand Sehgal]

A prisoner at stake :) only you can give her the freedom :)
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[Tarry Franck]

I couldn't agree more Anand.. Thanks for reviewing.

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Tarry this was deep and on the dark end, The only way to change the inner core is keep moving , keep writing , just do something other than dwell in the halls of darkness, Our mind is the most powerful of all tools ever made, no matter what is wrong with us we can block out what it is, every1 has there ways of doing so, Exercise, meditation, God, Talking-but going to talk the good stuff, people don't take to kind to a dark spot. I am sorry I cant stand emmm. I got my own way void out stuff. I hope you find yours:) No1 deserves to be in bondage.

[Tarry Franck]

I really needed to hear that Jonathan. Thank you for your kind words. I'm trying the best I can - it's just hard right now but I'll pull through.

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[Tarry Franck]

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