The Dream

Good night to the moon

My friend

I'm going to miss the shine

You send,

I welcome the dreams

That you offer through the night

In hopes of dreaming

With such insight,

A psychic dream I hope for

So I know what is coming next

In hopes it won't

Cause a hex,

For they are hard to release

And that, I don't look forward to

But please I hope to find the answers

In the moon, you.

Reviews

[Michael G. Smith]

I received your message how sometimes the unknown of the next things in life can cause some worry when we contemplate on them. I know when I start to over think life I get quite stressed. I have been trying through pray to realize that no matter what the outcome worry never affects it one way or another.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Michael

[Frieda P]

A bit mystical and a lot dreamy Tarry....hope that moon finds you my friend.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank You Frieda

[Coyote Poetry]

The moon and dreams. They do fall together. I like your thoughts and question in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

This has a an almost mystical feel to me , I love the wistfulness of it. Enjoyed!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Sharon

[Sami Khalil]

You shine like that magical moon and those glittering dreams in your writes...Bravo...............

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Beautiful... hope you find the answer your looking for...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena

[Kianna]

Dear Tarry Franck,

Hello, how are you doing today? I hope all is well with you. I was looking at some new writing pieces and saw this poem. It looked interesting so I thought I might take a look and see what you have here.

The first four lines would flow a little better without the word, "that" in there. Removing the word would make the rhyme between "friend" and "send" coordinate better. However, that's just my opinion.

I have to complement you on the consistent rhyme scheme you have here. It's simple and short. I have to say though I hate psychic dreams. They give me the shivers. I prefer to take every day as it comes. However, you have captured the general mystique of the night and its nature. I find the word "you" kind of just sitting there for no reason, but I understand that it keeps the rhyme scheme pure so it's sitting there for a reason. I feel that last line could be revised maybe. I don't know, but this was a nice read.

I say good job.

86/100

Sincerely JazzSoulKeke,

God bless

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you JazzSoulKeke

[Linda alexander]

Good write, great rhyming, loved it

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Linda

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome, my pleasure

[Lover Of Words]

The comfort of the moon can be something unique in the eye of a poet and the depths of a dream of a sleeping soul can sometimes be so deep and this is what this is very deep and a tremendous write

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Kelsey

[Lover Of Words]

You are welcome