Angel In Disguise

A magical animal

Appeared before me on a trail

It was so majestic

I couldn't believe my eyes

A beautiful horn, mane and braided tail,

It approached me with such ease

And I was able to pet it

With no problems

We actually were on the grounds to sit,

She was so white like an angel in disguise

She calmed my every nerve

She seemed so wise,

An animal of this nature

I knew I wanted to spend the day

If not more

With this majestic unicorn,

This day was so pleasant

I didn't want to leave

So I laid upon her mane

Through the dark hours

And we slept next to one another

As she protected me

I knew I should have gone

But I couldn't leave this

Angel to go home,

From then on

Day to night

It was the same

Her protecting me

As I lay upon her mane.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful story in the poem. The unicorn is a beast of honor. Bring good luck and hope. I like your story. I believe a unicorn would be a angel leading us to a better place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Coyote

[Linda alexander]

I believe we all have guardian angel who act as guide, protector, and comforter. It is a very good poem, enjoyed it.

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks you Coyote

[A Soap Mess Stories]

I loved how you related the unicorn as an angel...my favorite animal is a unicorn...loved the story....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena

[marie]

beautiful poem, lovely and safe:) you succeeded in making this a peaceful word. its as if it came from a childs dream wonderfully imaged can't wait to read more of your work, sorry i haven't been on for a while, hopefully that will change though:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much for reviewing. I haven't been on awhile either so I forgive you LOL

[Eddie Phillips]

This poem sweeps you up in the myth of it. I loved the story and the beauty of it. Awesome job.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Eddie

[Al R. Arce]

This is one of the best pieces I have read from you! Well done!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Cemi

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

We could all use a magical unicorn at times. I could feel the contentment and peace in this lovely write.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Sharon

[Sami Khalil]

Angels in disguise can be angels of love and protection. We all have those angels and devils within...Bravo

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Sami very much

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)...............

[Lover Of Words]

This is a magical piece of love and honor.... If someone has the ability to give you the feel of protection with only there love then you have captured someone that is quite hard to find.... Love is a simple way of protection... You give off a magical touch to this that is so beautiful i could actually see this going on in my mind.... Perfection my dear so lovely

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Kelsey

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure Tarry