Hanging On A String

I'll always remember

What you told me

Not sure where this relationship would go

But you don't want it to end

So I'm hanging on a string

Of a love...

I'm happy where we are now

And don't want it to end either

But you are a realist

And believe it's going to

At one point or another

Due to your past relationship...

I don't know what to say to that

Except to have faith

And our destiny will decide

If this relationship

Will survive.

Reviews

[Lover Of Words]

You two are truly meant for each other and you both know it.... Love can sometimes be scary if someone has not felt it in a while... You hold on tight to that string that your hanging on and pull yourself back up my lady cause he is not going anywhere you know it and so does he.... Lovely and real :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear for giving me hope

[Lover Of Words]

It was nothing my dear.... Keep that sparkle in your eye and the hope that i gave you will stay forever

[Coyote Poetry]

"Except to have faith
And our destiny will decide
If this relationship
Will survive."
The above lines are all we have sometimes. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Eddie Phillips]

What is meant to be will be. Too often people place concern over love. If you love someone and they love you there should be no concern. I have lived this poem Tarry and i know it will work out.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Eddie

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Only destiny can decide whether a relationship can last. Lovely words Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena

[Renée]

that is a scary reality when building a relationship..you captured that teetering feeling very well..

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Renee

[Renée]

it will get better luv...

[Linda alexander]

well said, destiny is at times faraway from desires and goals, anyhow good luck

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Alex

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Alex

[Sami Khalil]

You still hold on to that small hope , the guiding light and the difficult path...A wonderful poem...:)..............

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................