Survive

I live a life

With downfalls and all

Through faults

I will fall,

Through thankfulness

I will revive

And live to the best

Of my own

True test,

Where do I go from here

Through the ups and downs of life

Not sure but wherever it may be

I will survive with rife.

Reviews

[Lover Of Words]

We all have to find our own ways to survive though our lives hurdles. And the good thing about life is the bad stuff we have to sturggle to get past always brings bigger and better things... Live for your self and love yourself and surround yourself with people are there to support you when called upon.. Hurdles in life will knock us down but you have to be strong enough to see past the bad and look towards the light of the good and rise back to your feet and show yourself that you CAN survive the difficulties thrown at you... Knowing you as well as i do i know you can do it and i think you know it in yourself as well... this is a very strong powerful poem... Great work

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much dear.

[Lover Of Words]

Your very welcole

[Eddie Phillips]

Love the positive feel of this poem and the conviction. Nothing can hold us down but self.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Eddie

[Anand Sehgal]

we fail , again we regroup to combat. that is called life. full of crests and troughs.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Anand

[Al R. Arce]

My Dear! First thing is learn from the past but don't dwell on it. If you do it will haunt you. Second is, look at the small picture. The best things in life come in tiny packages. Cherish the trivial and you'll truly enjoy life. The warmth of the sun, the song of a bird, the wind on your skin, the touch of a loved one, the silence of companionship, a burning fire. Love yourself is the third one. Recognize your flaws and do your best to compensate for them. But don't be afraid of getting hurt for being yourself. After all pain goes hand in hand with love. Finally, use your poetry to expand beyond your feelings. Go to realms you've never thought you'd go! You'll be amazed at what you'll discover about yourself!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Cemi

[Jack...]

Life is filled with these ups and downs, but the positive attitude you display in this piece will always be the key to us standing up again once we have fallen. Very nicely done Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Jack

[Sami Khalil]

We have those survival instincts , some use them and some don't...Bravo.........

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Sami...and I know this is off the subject but are those your eyes?

[Sami Khalil]

Very similar. Almost the same...You are welcome...:)...........

[Tarry Franck]

They are beautiful

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you kindly...:)...........

[Tarry Franck]

You're quite welcomed

[Sami Khalil]

:).....................

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. I understand the poem also. Life lead us to good and bad places. We must stand our ground and keep going forward. I like the ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Coyote

[A Soap Mess Stories]

You speak the truth as we all have our ups and downs and do our best just trying to survive. Well said Tarry. :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena