Whirlwind Lover

Where do the days go

When your around

Seems like they pass so fast

But I take advantage of all you have,

Just the hold of your hand

Makes my heart skip a beat

Your kisses spin me in a whirl

Yet you leave me at a stand,

A stand so tall that it leaves my spirit so high

So high the landscape I could glide.

Reviews

[Lover Of Words]

Time flies but when you are with the one you love it seem too fly like lighting speed... Love is when two come as one and i see that happening here... Holding your lovers hand is the best thing just being with them can change the world... this is a great write... Awesome job talented poet!.. Perfect title :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Kelsey - My angel

[Lover Of Words]

Its my pleasure- your awesome

[Eddie Phillips]

Real love feels like a ride. t really does take your breath away. Wonderful poem Tarry

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Eddie

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

When your around -> When you're around. :)

You describe the feeling very well, Tarry. I also love my whirlwind lover. :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Blue

[Coyote Poetry]

Times does go too fast when we are content. I like the description of happiness and the ending. Good to know true happiness and be able to fly into happiness. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[luviva]

AMEN.. thats the power of love!
nice write

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Luviva

[A Soap Mess Stories]

So romantical ... so full of love ... exactly how I feel about my lover ... praying he will drive up safely next week ... I miss him so ...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena

[Jack...]

Sure does sound like someones in love to me...Very nicely done Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks Jack

[Anand Sehgal]

good times fly faster. sensitive write terry . compact :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Anand

[Sami Khalil]

We can indeed be in the grasps of love or its whirlwinds...Bravo.............

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)