Gasp

You are my hearts desire

No other do I admire

You make me smile a mile away

You make me laugh with all you say,

You have a magical force within

That touches the depth of my soul

And I wouldn't pull away

I will always hold,

Hold your hand and your heart within my grasp

Because your magic makes me oh so gasp.

Reviews

[Lover Of Words]

This is beyond the words of the depths of love honor and respect for another person... A love that makes you live for more... A love that makes you smile in your sleep... A love that makes your eyes glow with admiration. You are someone i know that when i look at you i dont only see you i see the love your soul holds for one special person in your life... Love is something treasured we all hope to find one day in our lifes but one we learn to hope for... Love honor and respect the one that gives us the meaning of true love... This my dear is not only real... but this is beyond amazing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much dear

[A Soap Mess Stories]

It's amazing what love can do to a person....so beautiful....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Valerie

[Eddie Phillips]

My last review fits this poem also. Love can wind you. I love how you explore that in this piece.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Eddie

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

You have a magical force within
That touches the depth of my soul

The thought makes me gasp, too. :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much Blue

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to lose your breathe when your true love is near. Thank you for the amazing poem of love.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Al R. Arce]

I echo my colleague's reviews. Sweet, simple, effective. Nice read!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Cemi

[Antoñyo]

oOoh...this might be my new favorite from you, as it's my depth for sure.

Thanks for the share

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Antonyo

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

A powerfully romantic write!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Sharon

[Jack...]

What a wonderful feeling this is...very nice Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Jack