Loving The Shore

Loving The Shore

A Poem by Tarry Franck

I admire you below the sun
I admire you below the moon
I admire the smile you place on my face
I admire all your fun,
Without you, I wouldn't know
The true meaning of love
I wouldn't know the true meaning of being blessed
For all that you have shown,
I'm blessed by your honest ways
I'm blessed by what you have given me
In these past beautiful days,
That makes me love you more and more
Like the waves love the shore.

© 2013 Tarry Franck


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Loved this one Tarry. This poem is happy and filled with words to make the reader smile. One thing I find funny is your use of the word shore. originating in the north east the word shore was the only word I used to describe where the ocean meets the sand, until I moved to Texas and it is now the coast. The word shore always brings pleasant memories back ot me. Very nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jack



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This piece made me think of loved ones whom i wanted to say all these things to, so it speaks to the soul IMO which means it came from YOUR soul Tarry. Hard to pen what the soul makes us feel at times so this is especially good in my book.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much ANTO
Another poem by you Tarry that just carries the reader away.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

10 Years Ago

Thank you Eddie
The sea and love. Two of my favorite things. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

10 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote
I like the metaphor of likening one's love to how the waves love the shore. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you Blue
Nothing quite like the love of the Father,That's what I felt. Awesome Tarry:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you Jonathan
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11 Years Ago

Welcome Tarry
Another heartfelt piece from you that feels just like those waves loving the shore...

Thanks you

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Antonyo
Such a happy and uplifting write! Very romantic. I liked the metaphor and the rhyming. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Lydi**
Well done. Love this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Sweet loving words ... gives you hope to smile ... :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you Starrleena

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