Leaving A Loving Trace

I would love to have you

By my side everyday

But deep inside I know

That can't be

Living a distance apart

Makes me want you even more next to me,

I miss you when you are near

I miss you more when you are gone

Makes me feel so alone,

But deep inside I know

That we're not really apart

Because you are near within my heart,

Time to time I will have to face

More moments like this

But the great thing is your love

Will always leave a loving trace.

Reviews

[Jack...]

This is beautiful and a bit sad Tarry. To miss someone when they are near, because we know that time keeps moving and soon they will be gone tugs so tightly at the heart strings. It is almost an impossible feeling to describe, but you have done so beautifully in your poem today. Very nicely done.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Jack

[A Soap Mess Stories]

so full of hope when faced with distance love...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Valerie

[MoriartyMesa]

There is a want that is more than normal in this, was someone a muse of the wording, or was it deeper?

[Tarry Franck]

Someone - thank you for reviewing

[Leigh]

This is making me miss people I am away from, I love the way you have expressed this

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much dear but I'm sorry you are missing your people.

[Leigh]

Dont worry they are with me in my mind

[Tarry Franck]

and nothing can take that away from you.

[Talal Hussain]

Beautiful is the right word...So true and honest emotions..loved it :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Talal

[Lydia Shutter]

Deep romantic longing in this beautifully written poem. Very honest emotions expressed well. Lydi**

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Beautiful and I understand it very well been there:) Awesome work Tarry:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Jonathan

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Your very welcome Tarry:)

[Michael G. Smith]

Now you have made miss my wife evermore.

[Tarry Franck]

Not quite sure what to say to that but thank you for reviewing :)

[Michael G. Smith]

I work out of town and I just left this morning for an undetermined amount of time.

[Tarry Franck]

Awe I'm so sorry :(

[Antoñyo]

Wonderful expression of longing but having hope and patience from within!

Thanks for the share

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Antonyo