Leaving A Loving Trace

Leaving A Loving Trace

A Poem by Tarry Franck

I would love to have you
By my side everyday
But deep inside I know
That can't be
Living a distance apart
Makes me want you even more next to me,
I miss you when you are near
I miss you more when you are gone
Makes me feel so alone,
But deep inside I know
That we're not really apart
Because you are near within my heart,
Time to time I will have to face
More moments like this
But the great thing is your love
Will always leave a loving trace.

© 2014 Tarry Franck


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This is beautiful and a bit sad Tarry. To miss someone when they are near, because we know that time keeps moving and soon they will be gone tugs so tightly at the heart strings. It is almost an impossible feeling to describe, but you have done so beautifully in your poem today. Very nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jack



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so full of hope when faced with distance love...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

10 Years Ago

Thank you Valerie
There is a want that is more than normal in this, was someone a muse of the wording, or was it deeper?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

10 Years Ago

Someone - thank you for reviewing
This is beautiful and a bit sad Tarry. To miss someone when they are near, because we know that time keeps moving and soon they will be gone tugs so tightly at the heart strings. It is almost an impossible feeling to describe, but you have done so beautifully in your poem today. Very nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jack
This is making me miss people I am away from, I love the way you have expressed this

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear but I'm sorry you are missing your people.
Leigh

11 Years Ago

Dont worry they are with me in my mind
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

and nothing can take that away from you.
Beautiful is the right word...So true and honest emotions..loved it :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you Talal
Deep romantic longing in this beautifully written poem. Very honest emotions expressed well. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful and I understand it very well been there:) Awesome work Tarry:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you Jonathan
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11 Years Ago

Your very welcome Tarry:)
Now you have made miss my wife evermore.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Not quite sure what to say to that but thank you for reviewing :)
Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

I work out of town and I just left this morning for an undetermined amount of time.
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Awe I'm so sorry :(
Wonderful expression of longing but having hope and patience from within!

Thanks for the share

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you Antonyo

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