Awaiting

Awaiting

A Poem by Tarry Franck


I'm just awakening
From a slumber sleep
And see the moon
Still shining for me,
Awaiting a magical moment
For my lover to arrive
I await patiently
As my heart for him thrives,
As he approaches I get so excited
My heart beats frantically
And I fall into his arms
Whole heartedly,
He lifts me for a lovers twirl
And passionately kisses me
Something I've been craving
I can't thank you enough baby.

© 2013 Tarry Franck


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I loved this. It flowed well, told a story and made me remember how I once felt that excitement for someone I was in love with. Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you Star
Well, you did it again! You expressed my feelings exactily while waiting for my lover. I am anxiously waiting for his arrival tomorrow September 13, 2013...well written, so passionate, romantic......

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Glad I could be of help ;) Thanks for reviewing Starrleena
I can literally feel the excited 'butterfyl' feeling in this poem Tarry and
then the line 'He lifts me for a lovers twirl' almost made me wish it was me being twirled lol.
Great lovers prose Tarry.
X

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Anto
I'm just awakening
From a slumber sleep
And see the moon
Still shining for me,

lovely imagery. Would have loved to see the poem a bit more scenic :)
anyways good write

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing Anand
I am a romantic and this poem pulls at the romantic in me. You crafted a lovely poem of love and passion. Thank you for this beautiful poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Eddie
You paint a beautiful picture with your words
I could feel the emotions as i read. Just wonderful!
Keep it up! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much
I like this poem wholeheartedly...Splendid...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thanks you so much Sami
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
that last line "I can't thank you enough baby" ruined the whole poem.
Leave it out.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your consideration.
I see you being swept off your feet Tarry, whilst twirling in your in your passionate embrace, luverly my friend. :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend.
This is amazing in so many ways. Amazing and breathe taking love is all over this page and your heart.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

Your very welcome

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Tarry Franck
Tarry Franck

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