Nor Shallow Or Hollow

At the end of the day

Many thoughts comb through

And all I can do

Is think about you,

Every turn I take

I see you

And think about the love we make,

You are the one for me

I have no doubts

We are one in the same

Thanks to our travels, our route,

We seem to know the direction we are headed

And that's a good line to follow

For our relationship is nowhere near

Shallow nor hollow.

Reviews

[Star]

Reminds me of my friends from school when we were kids and how at 40 we think of each other all the time and never forget each other even after all these years

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks for reviewing Star :)

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

A hopeful and lovely piece!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Sharon

[OBWhiteHawk]

Just beautiful, you are so lucky to have a strong love like what you describe.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much OB

[Sami Khalil]

I know you are neither for your poetry is full and deep...:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks to our travels, our route,
We seem to know the direction we are headed.
SO you are certain about the destination, and less left upon destiny . :P

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for reviewing

[Frieda P]

Glad you're back on that path again Tarry, nice to read about new found love in your poetry...'shallow nor hollow' like that, well done.

[Tarry Franck]

I'm glad too Frieda...so much happier :) Thank you for reviewing :)

[Antoñyo]

"At the end of the day..." Love the beginning, sums it all up and sets up the feel greatly.

Thanks for sharing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Antonyo

[ANTO]

Those minor outlying islands seem to have been hit with the major force of LOVE Tarry.
Your quill exudes the stuff.. ;)
X

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Anto

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Lovely ... the way love should be ... may you be blessed with many happy years!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena

[Lover Of Words]

This right here is pure beauty love is something else... i love it great job... one of my all time favorites

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome :D