Shadow Of Doom

Your wings shadow over me

I kneel to your doom

There's nothing else to do

I can smell your fumes,

A raging fire within

That you breathe

Consuming my breath

As I attempt to breathe in,

Every twist and turn

You appear before me

So I go below

Where I think I'm safe to go,

Yet you follow again

Why can't you find another

To consume their life

Why am I the one you want to bother.

Reviews

[A Soap Mess Stories]

A dark piece...well written...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Valerie

[Antoñyo]

I can be weird at times, so with that in mind...This speaks to me from a dark place inside the heart. Wanting to love, regretting I did, and just when I think I don't want to ever again....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for reviewing

[Sami Khalil]

This is dark and wonderful. The shadows of sin or death or even danger can always follow us and haunt us within and without...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for reviewing

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Vivid imagery, felt as though I was suffocating. Well done.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Frieda P]

There's a dense feeling to this, like thick smoke trying to consume you and take your last breath...some relationships can feel as such. I think you need an escape route my friend.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for reviewing