A Breath Of Fresh Air

You wandered into my life

Make no mistake

You have shared

So much joy and laughter

A breath of fresh air

When I thought

I was drowning in despair,

You threw light into

My window of darkness

And I greatly appreciate it

You showed me a world of honesty

In a world of guilt

I love you more than words can describe

But felt the need to transcribe,

I pray you never leave me

Because when my wings were tangled

You set them free.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. I like the contentment of the words. A wise person appreciate when love is offered and given.
"When I thought
I was drowning in despair,
You threw light into
My window of darkness"
The above lines were my favorite. When someone show us the good road and places. We are very lucky. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Coyote

[A Soap Mess Stories]

beautiful...so full of love...romance...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Starrleena

[Antoñyo]

This is a refreshing expression of joy and appreciation for what most take for granted...if they notice at all. And then, "I pray you never leave me" ...Who puts their heart out there in Vulnerabilityland anymore? The rare and special, that's who!

Once more, a shoot'n score!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my dear friend Antonyo

[Sami Khalil]

"You showed me a world of honesty

In a world of guilt

I love you more than words can describe

But felt the need to transcribe,

I pray you never leave me

Because when my wings were tangled

You set them free."
Amazing words and flow all in a lovely romantic flair...Bravo...:)

[Tarry Franck]

Glad you enjoyed. Thank you so much for your kindness.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[ANTO]

A very relevant write Tarry. Honest and a fine thank-you to the subject of the poem.
Well done!
X

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Anto

[Knightingale]

A well-crafted poem. And I mean well-crafted. The rhythm in this piece works well with the honest emotions and thoughts being conveyed.
"You threw light into
my window of darkness
and I greatly appreciate it"
I loved this part. It literally gave me chills.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much Knightingale

[Knightingale]

My pleasure entirely.

[Lover Of Words]

I must say i wasn't expecting this....Even though i already read it... I had no idea i did that took you out of the dark place you were in..... but i am glad i was able to help.... Thank you for writing this i love it

[Tarry Franck]

No hiding it - now you know - you're the best. Love you

[Lover Of Words]

I know your not hiding it... Yes i now know... You are the best my dear... I love you too