Carry My Heart

Carry My Heart

A Poem by Tarry Franck

Time makes love
Light like fire
The flames burn
With such a sensual glow
That only from friendship
Love may grow,
We've waited many years
To come together
And without you realizing
You have washed away many tears,
You have carried to my heart
And placed upon my face
Such joy and laughter
I truly embrace,
Wherever this may lead
I know not yet
But I'm willing to follow
However far these feelings may go.

© 2013 Tarry Franck


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The worst thing to do in a relationship is to rush. Being friends first is always recommended. Things take time in a relationship to grow and being at ease with someone is always a better feeling. This is a good example of such combination of friendship and love. Nice writing from you Tarry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Blip
Relic's Bare Trees

11 Years Ago

You're welcome Tarry.



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Leading a friendship into a relationship can be make or break, it may be the best decision you ever make; however it may not be quite right for the two of you. This poem is perfect in length and flow, it is informal, a feature I struggle with in my writes - that I commend you on! I can imagine this read slowly and softly, almost as a Shakespherian soliloquy! Nice work Tarry :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lucky you to feel this love. Very beautifully done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


very well written and lovely poem and you are able to capture the feelings of love into this writing. loved the last two lines that's what happens when you are in love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend
Love is friendship caught on fire. You captured this in your writing. Nice work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sharon
A beautiful and hopeful poem. Good to open our mind and heart. Journey with another and tried to find joy and happiness. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Coyote
Once again tarry you've captured my feelings exactly ... in the words of Popeye. "Very romantical."

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Glad I could - love the connection you and I have :)
A Soap Mess Stories

11 Years Ago

Lol!
Can a friend be more than a friend without that friendship being doomed?
I pray that 'carry my heart' doesn't become 'bury my heart' Tarry.
This is a fine poem that I would be proud to have written
Well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Anto
This is sublime and soothing...I like the way that you allow the words to linger a little, which I think is a good metaphor for a strong relationship. We must let the tea steep before we drink it, you know? Love the sentiment and emotion here; so intrinsically honest. I do hope the best for this budding bloom...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much :)
The worst thing to do in a relationship is to rush. Being friends first is always recommended. Things take time in a relationship to grow and being at ease with someone is always a better feeling. This is a good example of such combination of friendship and love. Nice writing from you Tarry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Blip
Relic's Bare Trees

11 Years Ago

You're welcome Tarry.
sounds as if someone has kindled love from a long time friendship...those are the best kind! this is a very pleasant and obviously heartfelt delight to peruse. such a sweet poem. lovely!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you Quin

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