Morning Light

The morning dew

Twinkles with the sunlights rays

Birds chirping all around

With a gentle breeze

And kittens wrestling on the ground,

I take off my shoes

And walk among the dew,

The feel of Mother Nature

Below my feet

Gives me sensations

I thought I would never feel again

For the simple fact

That I've lived a world of sin,

I thought she would reject me

But she welcomed me instead

Now I can live with proper thoughts

Whirling through my head.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

who's to say what is beauty and what is a sin? as far as i know, only humans proffer sin upon others. nature is both beautiful and giving. we don't own the earth, she owns us. and if we give her respect we are rewarded tenfold by her beauteous bounty. live as you will live, dear lady, and do not let yourself be judged by your fellow man...believe me, mankind is the least justified critic ....well penned.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[KeelyJane]

Sometimes the simplest things can renew our sense of self. Lovely poem my friend. It was very uplifting for me. Thanks for sharing.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you KeelyJane

[zainul]

Great escape from the feeling of sin.
Dew is a source of sacred joy.
Very well poem.
Thanks for sharing.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much for reviewing my new friend. Nice to meet you!

[zainul]

You are most welcome,my dear friend.
This is a great pleasure for me to meet such a fine poet here.

[ANTO]

A confessional and a herald for nature - layers abound here Tarry and I can feel that dew also - well told.
X

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Anto

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Nature has the ability to heal a well as reassure in our quiet moments with her in our presence. Lovely poem.

[Tarry Franck]

Much appreciated

[Relic's Bare Trees]

My pleasure.

[Carissa Marie]

For some reason, i heard music while i was reading this. This is so cool and relaxing. :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you ghostwriter

[OBWhiteHawk]

I love it! A feeling of being renewed, a new day and all the negative feelings, struggles, gone from yesterday. Morning can be such a beautiful time.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Jessi_express yourself]

I think this is great, I love how you made it seem the reader can see what is going on.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. Each day we have opportunity to start anew. The strong description took me to a good place and personal thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Lovely words. Such beauty to see the freshness in nature.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my dear friend