Life Of Despair

The darkest of nights

I roam

Looking for a love

I can call home,

I search deep

But I fall to the ground

And just weep,

Is there a love out there

For only me

Do I keep searching

Do I dare

Or should I tear these wings

And live a lonely life

Of despair.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we must leave the sadness behind. Allow our wings to spread wide and challenge life and a new day. I enjoyed the poem. I like poetry that ask questions. You did. Better to be free like a butterfly than lost and forgotten. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[KeelyJane]

It's been said that love comes when we stop searching for it. Perhaps.
But we'll never stop writing about it.

[MoriartyMesa]

If i may be a bit of a pig, i Love the pain, it is as sweet as wine and your words made it flow like a red wine.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you MoriartyMesa

[OBWhiteHawk]

This poem I totally feel, I sometimes feel this despair and pain, wanting love so badly but never able to quite find it. I still hope to have the love that makes me smile someday, though. A very emotional pull to this one, well done.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you and I do wish you the best.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Nicely written. I could relate to this. This is how I felt when my marriage ended.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you and sorry for your loss of your marriage.

[Frieda P]

Such a sigh of loneliness on this page, written with such finesse, despair is the ultimate soul slayer, nicely pen'd my friend.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much my dear friend

[Frieda P]

Nice to see you Tarry, have missed you...my pleasure always x

[Tarry Franck]

Nice to see you too...sorry I haven't been reviewing lately - I've just been so busy but I will make my rounds back to your page soon my friend. Missing you too

[Frieda P]

No problemo, just nice to see you again my friend.....

[quinfinn]

loneliness is a tough place to be, and can be debilitating . best to stretch out your wings and take flight to other venues when the nest has been deserted. wonderfully penned, Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Quinn :) Glad to see you back :)

[quinfinn]

i had a health issue....i am going nowhere....thank you

[Tarry Franck]

Oh Hope all is well now!

[Sami Khalil]

"Is there a love out there

For only me

Do I keep searching

Do I dare"
A simple but a powerful poem full of great contemplation on love and asks great questions on its matters of despair...Well done...:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..............

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

The eternal question... Is there a "perfect" love out there? One that is meant just for us? Or, do we find the best that we can and attempt to shape it (and ourselves) into a new definition of perfection? Living a lonely life is terrible, and sometimes we can be lonely even when there are a hundred other people in the room, or just one other person. Lonliness really comes from within, I think. This was carefully crafted, and it shows in the emotional boundaries of the piece. Well written and completely relatable.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much my dear friend.

[Lover Of Words]

The life of despair is one of the hardest ones to live... Thats why choosing another path is the best option we have... No matter what our hearts tell us to do walking away from the dark path and finding the one that makes us giggle with joy is what everyone needs to do.... Despair is not the answer.... Find trust in ones around and hold on to that.. Let the bad blood out and let the good in... Turn on the light and follow it let your heart lead you but also hold the hands of the ones who will hold you up... love comes in better forms when we are no longer looking for it.. It has to come to us its the best way to handle love dont go looking for it.. the path will form on its own ... This is a great peice and it is amazing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much my angel - such wise words from a young girl. We should know seems we are walking the same path.

[Lover Of Words]

Oh we are for sure..... It is my greatest pleasure :)... Walking down it together so we can help each other