Victory

My heart is raging

My soul afire

For what you are damaging

My blood boils with desire,

If I could get a grip on you

I would tear your heart to shreds

Let you feel the pain

That you left me to shed,

Leaving you in misery

I would love nothing more to see

For your ruin

Would be my victory.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

these type of individuals create their own misery, under a facade of pomp and bravado. i see it every day...they act happy and triumphant and proud to cover that pain and disgust and self loathing with a thin veneer of lies..."hijacked" by their thinly veiled egos....well penned, Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Quin

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime all we have is anger. I like the flow of thoughts and the honest and direct ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote

[Sami Khalil]

Powerful words and poem...:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

I can feel the rage in your words...;-)

[Tarry Franck]

;)

[Lover Of Words]

Great write my aunt

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

You are welcome :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This is a piece of anger and angst...very emotionally charged. I like to call these types of pieces "get it out of our system" work, and I do quite a bit of that myself; a purging of sorts. Still, as stupid and crazy as it sounds, forgiveness is better revenge than actual vengence.

[Tarry Franck]

I know but had to "get it out of my system" I truthfully wouldn't waste the effort on this person. Simply going through the different levels of grieving.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

And that is absolutely important!