You Belong

You left me on a rainy day

With a hug felt so deeply

All I could do is hold you so tight

As you left me weeping,

My soul was melting inside

And all I could do is fall

Embrace the ground

With my head in my hands

As my heart pounds,

What do I do

Where do I go from here

So many questions

Left unanswered

As you left me dear,

My love for you is ever so strong

Forever in my heart

You belong.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i hate that feeling of betrayal and desperation, but lost love will do that to a person...as for self doubt and loathing, stow that s**t....no one is worth it, believe me. we must all muddle through our feelings and find light on the other side of the issue. nice write, although i would love to see more positive work coming from you. you write beauty and passion so well....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Quin and I hope to write something more positive soon...please have patience with me

[quinfinn]

i will be here for you, should you need a friend....and support you as best i can. have faith in your beliefs and take heart.... everything happens for a reason...something better is coming....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for such kindness

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and sad poem. Separation of someone we loved. Leave a permanent wound in our heart. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for reviewing :)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Another good one where I also feel the same way...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Frieda P]

Painful read Tarry, I do hope to see your brighter side again soon, but you do so move me with your angst. x

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Frieda and I will find my brighter side soon and I believe that will be thanks to all of you here

[Lover Of Words]

Love is the strongest feeling the human body has this is awesome you let you heart out on the page... I felt that and i find this to be mind blowing... Short but to the point spectular job :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Kelsey

[Lover Of Words]

You are quite welcome

[luviva]

ohhhhh so nice
and the title is just fiti couldnt even think that you would take that angle judging from the title only. nice wok;)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much