Final Destiny

A loaded gun to the side of the head

An itchy finger on the trigger

Hoping to shoot you dead,

Apologies flowing through the mind

With an inner voice reiterating

'Not to waste time,'

Memories of accomplishments

That were made

Satisfaction never found

Time has come to face

The final decision

Be it above or below the ground,

The decision has been made

Tears from others will come and go

And nothing will change

A memory to them

You will only remain.

Reviews

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Sounds as if you got the message out loud and clear! Must've been tough to write this one! Loved the angst this portrayed. Well written!

[Tarry Franck]

It was and thank you

[Rob Santana]

It's been awhile since I've read your work. Strong piece, awesome job.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Talal Hussain]

Very impressive write Tarry...the message loud and clear :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[quinfinn]

some people just shouldn't be allowed to own a gun....if you're willing to kill yourself then whats to stop you from killing others? nice write, tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank You Quin

[Frieda P]

Ekkk, tough read, probably just as difficult to write. You punched the point home Tarry...good job here.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Frieda P

[Holly Mason]

not to waste time-that thought hits me...incarceration is wasted time or is it
there is a lot of thought in this....yes others will have only their memories but I will have peace
like your title choice and pic much
thank you for sharing*)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

SAD....Good but sad...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

Ah breath takingly awesome!!!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you