Withstand The Winds

Gale force winds

Have taken control today

And leaves everything

In disarray,

Why do you present yourself

In such a way

What have we done

To you anyway,

You push us, you pull us

In every different direction

We're losing our ground

And every sensation,

The center of the storm

Finally upon us

Now is the time

To regain our form,

Unfortunately it doesn't last very long

And you become more powerful

Ever so strong,

Eventually the tide ebbs and flows

Except now filled with debris

Thanks to that powerful storm

That traveled throughout the sea.

Reviews

[Ohhhwillow]

The first rhyme of disarray and today worked as a single couplet that gentle drew me into this piece. Despite feeling your second rhyme of 'way" and "anyway" was a bit forced, your closing rhyme compensated, as this one was truly enjoyable. As the weather, some things are beyond our control! It twists us and throws us, bashes us around with such ease! Loved you title, keep on writing Tarry, this was great!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you and have to give kudos to my niece, Kelsey. She came up with the title. Thank you Kelsey, love ya girl!!!

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure I love helping with your titles ;)

[Frieda P]

I know a few people like this, they make a mess and then are on their way....very aptly put Tarry, I like this one a lot...kudos my friend!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Frieda

[Lover Of Words]

Heyyyyy i like this one!!!!!!!
Nice title too ;)
Great job my superwoman!!!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you and I thought so too ;)

[Lover Of Words]

HAHA ;)