Withstand The Winds

Gale force winds

Have taken control today

And leaves everything

In disarray,

Why do you present yourself

In such a way

What have we done

To you anyway,

You push us, you pull us

In every different direction

We're losing our ground

And every sensation,

The center of the storm

Finally upon us

Now is the time

To regain our form,

Unfortunately it doesn't last very long

And you become more powerful

Ever so strong,

Eventually the tide ebbs and flows

Except now filled with debris

Thanks to that powerful storm

That traveled throughout the sea.

Reviews

[Ohhhwillow]

The first rhyme of disarray and today worked as a single couplet that gentle drew me into this piece. Despite feeling your second rhyme of 'way" and "anyway" was a bit forced, your closing rhyme compensated, as this one was truly enjoyable. As the weather, some things are beyond our control! It twists us and throws us, bashes us around with such ease! Loved you title, keep on writing Tarry, this was great!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you and have to give kudos to my niece, Kelsey. She came up with the title. Thank you Kelsey, love ya girl!!!

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure I love helping with your titles ;)

[Jayden Ireton]

A wonderful piece. I enjoyed the imagery. The sea is truly powerful.

[Tarry Franck]

thank you

[luviva]

well i dont know what you intended to write about but i relate it as the troubles and problems in life,. cause once they claim their victim, they take them every wrong direction possible.. but hey, atleast we do pull through.

[OBWhiteHawk]

It's beautiful. Man I can totally feel and hear the wind as I read this. I am really impressed with your style.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much OBWhiteHawk

[KeelyJane]

Great poem. Fantastic message that you delivered nicely with perfect metaphor. Thank you so much for sharing ;0)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for reviewing

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

wonderfully inspirational!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Neva

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Love this, it makes my morning starts in zest :) thanks for sharing, a worth to read.

Finally upon us
Now is the time
To regain our form,

Love the 3 lines.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the logic and reason for the poem.
"Unfortunately it doesn't last very long
And you become more powerful"
We learn to be stronger and able to withstand more hardships. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Beautiful! :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear friend

[PurpleQuartz]

Great write!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you