Withstand The Winds

Withstand The Winds

A Poem by Tarry Franck

Gale force winds
Have taken control today
And leaves everything
In disarray,
Why do you present yourself
In such a way
What have we done
To you anyway,
You push us, you pull us
In every different direction
We're losing our ground
And every sensation,
The center of the storm
Finally upon us
Now is the time
To regain our form,
Unfortunately it doesn't last very long
And you become more powerful
Ever so strong,
Eventually the tide ebbs and flows
Except now filled with debris
Thanks to that powerful storm
That traveled throughout the sea.

© 2013 Tarry Franck


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The first rhyme of disarray and today worked as a single couplet that gentle drew me into this piece. Despite feeling your second rhyme of 'way" and "anyway" was a bit forced, your closing rhyme compensated, as this one was truly enjoyable. As the weather, some things are beyond our control! It twists us and throws us, bashes us around with such ease! Loved you title, keep on writing Tarry, this was great!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you and have to give kudos to my niece, Kelsey. She came up with the title. Thank you Kelsey,.. read more
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

My pleasure I love helping with your titles ;)



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A wonderful piece. I enjoyed the imagery. The sea is truly powerful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

thank you
well i dont know what you intended to write about but i relate it as the troubles and problems in life,. cause once they claim their victim, they take them every wrong direction possible.. but hey, atleast we do pull through.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's beautiful. Man I can totally feel and hear the wind as I read this. I am really impressed with your style.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much OBWhiteHawk
Great poem. Fantastic message that you delivered nicely with perfect metaphor. Thank you so much for sharing ;0)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing
wonderfully inspirational!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you Neva
Love this, it makes my morning starts in zest :) thanks for sharing, a worth to read.

Finally upon us
Now is the time
To regain our form,

Love the 3 lines.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much
The first rhyme of disarray and today worked as a single couplet that gentle drew me into this piece. Despite feeling your second rhyme of 'way" and "anyway" was a bit forced, your closing rhyme compensated, as this one was truly enjoyable. As the weather, some things are beyond our control! It twists us and throws us, bashes us around with such ease! Loved you title, keep on writing Tarry, this was great!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you and have to give kudos to my niece, Kelsey. She came up with the title. Thank you Kelsey,.. read more
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

My pleasure I love helping with your titles ;)
I like the logic and reason for the poem.
"Unfortunately it doesn't last very long
And you become more powerful"
We learn to be stronger and able to withstand more hardships. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Beautiful! :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend
Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you

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