My Knight

Coal black hair

Hazel eyes

Muscular body

Sets this passion aflame,

My knight in shining armor

Come and whisk me away

Into the night

And throughout the day

Make love to me in your special way,

You enrapture me by your

Convoluted ways

I don't know whether I'm coming or going these days,

And trust me, it's not a bad thing

Because I would come and go for you

No matter what - for everything,

I place you on a pedestal

Because that's where you deserve to be

Your such a wonderful being

I would kiss the ground you walk upon

From dusk to dawn.

Reviews

[Leigh]

As much as you need him, he needs a lady, but doesnt it take ages to get all that armour off! He is one lucky guy I wish I was him

[Tarry Franck]

Awe thank you so very much

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the desire and the passion in the words. I like the feel of the days of knights and real passion. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear friend

[Frieda P]

Does he have a brother? Sounds like a bad boy knight in his 'convoluted ways'...not again! :-) Seriously, I meant to say good one Tarry!

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks Frieda and yes he does have a brother but he's spoken for already ;)

[Frieda P]

Ha story of my life :-) My pleasure always.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Love the passion and the romance…exactly how I feel.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you - see what I mean about us having so much in common - it's almost like we write each others lives in our poetry at times. It amazes me. :)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

I know what you mean. :-)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow beautiful write :) love the beautiful details of the character, stunning and gorgeous. Keep writing!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[Jayden Ireton]

This work of passion and love is beautifully written. I like the way the sentences are set up. It would be truly amazing to know a love that deep. Great work and imagery again.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much

[quinfinn]

gaily bedight, a gallant knight...a lucky man is he.....wonderful!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[Ohhhwillow]

You convey that fairy take like love we all know too well.. That absolute desire that turns us to mush haha, well done princess

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Willow

[Holly Mason]

this is a lovely pedestal love write
very nice to read
write on to your knight
thank you for sharing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[icelandicblue]

This is a lovely tribute to love. I particularly liked this:

You enrapture me by your
Convoluted ways
I don't know whether I'm coming or going these days,

So true, so true...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much