Love Never Leave Us

My love, I hold deep

You're special in my heart

Our love is passion filled with heat,

You're thought of every day

I want to hold you in every way,

I would be lost without you

For all the things you do

For all the things you say

I love you each and every way,

You guide my heart

To places I've never known

You love me in places

I've never been shown,

Without you in my heart 

I would break

Into so many pieces

So I beg and pray

This love will never leave us.

Reviews

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Again you have captured my feelings perfectly! :-) we seem to know what the other is longing for!

[Tarry Franck]

This is bizarre but I'm enjoying every minute of it. We have some kind of connection that may be handed down to us...things that make you hmmmm!!! ;)

[Frieda P]

Very passionate plea here, lives up to that lusty picture...great flow, keep that passion alive!

[Tarry Franck]

Will do dear Frieda - thank you

[Ohhhwillow]

Honest and clear, you show a certainty that makes me think of fate. of the idea of a 'soul mate'.. Lovely. Jeez, you are churning out the writes haha it is almost hard to keep up!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Willow - can't help it - when they flow they flow and I'm so thankful they do. I need to release as much as I can. I'm sure you can relate.

[Ohhhwillow]

Haha it is a quality I wished I possessed - alas, my pieces are few and failed. Keep up the good work, you are a passionate writer indeed

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much for the kind words.

[Jayden Ireton]

A wonderful picture to go with this work. The work itself shows such strong passion. You conjure up an image of a passion filled world for two loves. This is a wonderful work of art.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so kindly.

[Lover Of Words]

Thats the power of the words I KNOW that you my aunt hold deep This is so beautiful.... I am amazed by you IN EVERY WAY!!!! spectacular write my lovely :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome :)

[quinfinn]

beautifully written and sincere piece of prose here, Tarry. this is both believable and gorgeous. well done.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Quin