True Colors

You walked into my world

A guardian I thought you were

But it didn't take long

For the beatings to show,

You took advantage of my weakness

And I returned to your arms

For what, nothing but more harm

Verbal and physical

You shared both

But I have learned and I'm finally warned,

To stay far away from you

Even though it was not soon enough

I've dealt with what you are capable of

And I'm finally done with your colors of truth.

Reviews

[Lover Of Words]

The true colors have surely been shown you are the strongest woman that I myself have the pleasure of knowing and being able to love you is an true gift that anyone would love to have your love... This is a powerful story told by the power of words You allowed others to see what you have gone though with the words on this page....True colors can be dangerous like you and i both know... This is another spectacular piece... YOU ARE A STRONG woman you do not need that struggle in your life cause it will just take you down with them So i am saying this as i have and probably will say it for months to come I am so proud of you for walking away from
this issue.. And always remember you have a huge amount of support from me!! Great job

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome

[A Soap Mess Stories]

You show how strong of a woman you are with these words! Great write! :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Starrleena

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Life failures and stability will always defend in our decision, better end while we have still life to re-create the broken pieces. Great work.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Holly Mason]

colors of truth-that is a great statement and deserves a write all it's own-to me*)
very deep piece of writing
thank you for sharing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear Holly

[Ohhhwillow]

You ease into the idea of deceit and betrayal gracefully, inviting us with the word "thought", as an immediate indication of something otherwise. I would have liked to have read on, this definitely has potential to be longer! Your closing line is fantastic, vivid.. I would have liked to see more detail throughout to bring those colour into your piece and illuminate your experience.. Well done though, I hope you stick to your guns on keeping away from him!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Willow - And I agree more does need to be added and I will work on that. Thanks for the constructive criticism dear friend.

[quinfinn]

well, you certainly dashed my cyndi lauper fantasy with this write...not what i was expecting at all! but nicely examined and well dealt with in the end. good on ya!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you