Farewell/Goodbye

Farewell/Goodbye

A Poem by Tarry Franck

You came back into my life
20 years had gone by
I thought you were the person I left behind,
Little did I know, we both had changed
Some for the good, some for the bad
What difference did it make
We were totally rearranged
I had faults, you had faults
But I'm the only one getting the blame,
You see not what you do
You turn a blind eye
I'm the spotlight when all goes wrong
So I say to you farewell and goodbye.

© 2013 Tarry Franck


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Sounds as if it was best for a goodbye! Good write! :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Yes it was - thanks for reviewing.
Sometime we need additional farewells. Hard to find something that was lost. I like the story and the logical ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Yes indeed - thanks for the review
Better not to have those in our life who cannot accept their own faults and mistakes - it is an honest mind who is able to overcome their defects and develop into a great person. Nice idea, greatly penned

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
good riddance to bad rubbish. now, step over that corpse and get on with the business of life! well said!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
YES!!!! I am SO proud of you!!! Love you!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you love
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

Your welcome dear :)
A woman has come to her senses! Yay, bravo you, strong write, hope it's true dear friend....! I like the moxy in this one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Wooo, doing the happy dance!!
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thanks me too
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

:-)
Wow :) love the thoughts here, it is realistic and relatable story. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank yo so much

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Added on March 30, 2013
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Tarry Franck
Tarry Franck

LA, United States Minor Outlying Islands



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