Death Awaits

Death awaits you

He's by your side

No reason to run

Enjoy the ride,

Wherever he takes you

Don't make plans

You won't be there

Long enough to stand,

Some places are good

Some are bad

Just like you lived

Present and past,

It's a flight we will all take

But heaven forbid

I'm on your plane.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i do not fear death, we have met before...twice, as a matter of fact. as one who has been brought back from the "flatline" on two occasions i can honestly tell you that there is something beyond this realm. i have seen it. i have heard the voices of those souls already passed on and i have witnessed that bright light.....nice reminder of our mortality. well written.....

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks

[Leigh]

Nice twist at the end that kind of turns the tables somewhat.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much!

[PurpleQuartz]

This has a dark sound and definitely makes you think! Wonderful write.
Thank you for sharing your great poems!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

It's an unexpected things you will never know...so be it anyway good write :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

I take it this is written in the devil's voice...

'But heaven forbid I'm on your plane'

Or you literally meant plane..nice flight either way. Kudos.

[Tarry Franck]

Did not mean literally a plane & thanks

[Frieda P]

That's what I thought :-) my pleasure, always....x

[Sir Joseph]

Nice well written piece.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

This reminds me of Emily Dickinson's poem, "Because I Could Not Stop for Death."

[Tarry Franck]

Wow - thank you for the wonderful compliment :)

[Renée]

Well done...Death is a part of life, though people don't like to address it..

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you and hopefully everybody understands I'm not literally talking about a physical plane in the last line.

[Renée]

it could be taken either way..depending on the person...

[Tarry Franck]

agreed

[Lover Of Words]

This is so dark but yet so amazing all at the same time.... LOVE it... I enjoyed having the pleasure of picking the title... :) Glad you used it

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks sweetie and I'm glad I used it too ;)

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure Im glad you used it too