Looking For The Light

I'm walking through the

Dark woods

Can barely see

When these beautiful sounds

I hear suddenly,

I follow gracefully

That captivating melody,

I'm lost as it lulls me in

Where am I

I wander effortlessly,

I'm going in circles it seems 

And there I am

Without a doubt

Lost endlessly,

When all I was doing

Was looking for the light.

Reviews

[PurpleQuartz]

I love the message in this! Great writing Tarry!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[A Soap Mess Stories]

I love this! I too am just looking for the light.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you - together we shall search ;)

[Ohhhwillow]

There is an underlying message in this that is left to the reader and a breeze of mystery through each line. We all look for a light shining through the towering trees Tarry, well done

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[luviva]

ohhh so sweet, look
you insipire people with ypur writes you know...
even though we are in drakness going round in circles we should never stop looking for the light coz we will always find one.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for such a kind review and that's what I'm hoping for - to inspire people. You made my day :)

[Ahmad Cox]

I think we can all relate to this poem at some point in our lives. Thanks for posting such an honest poem. I could truly feel the emotions in this one. :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Ahmad

[Frieda P]

Looking for the light in the darkest hours, after endless wandering...that one can take you round in circles if you're not careful. Hope you found that light Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Frieda :)

[Leigh]

It would be natural to assume that the sounds might lead to light, but not always I suppose, it is probably really obvious but I don't get the metaphor, but a beautiful image provoking write, kind of spooky as well.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[quinfinn]

this whole piece is a brilliant metaphor....your best write ever! this one goes straight to my library.

[Tarry Franck]

Wow - thank you so much - WooHoo I'm in your library. You just made my night. :)

[quinfinn]

kudos!

[Tarry Franck]

:))))))

[beautiful dreamer]

wowsers tarry! great write :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[beautiful dreamer]

welcome :)

[Lover Of Words]

You blew me away with this one! Love it

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks :)

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome!