Darkened Heart

Your darkened heart

Has blinded me

I can't believe the hatred

That runs through your veins

Straight into your arteries,

A dark blood

That seeks out the strong

To bring to their knees

Pointing out all their wrongs,

You are full of such greed

You think everyone owes you

Well bow to this and heed,

I lift my finger to you, and you know the one

Take my advice

Stay on the run,

Your lies 

Your games

Your crimes

Will catch up to you

On the night

Of a new moon,

You will beg for mercy

But nobody will hear

Your mercy will fall on deaf ears,

And if you think I'm playing

Just try

You will know who is truly dealing.

Reviews

[James William Dyer]

Hatred is an awful thing to bear...I liked your words, but usually there is more to the hated person that just what "the hater" thinks. Look deep in yourself and try and find compassion for that being you hate so much, you'll be surprised how depthful your words will become. We all want to feel as though justice will be done for crimes committed against the innocent, unfortunately we all know that doesn't happen in many cases.....hope ya feel better

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for the wise advice :)

[Renée]

Very dark and thick this one reads..like tar... great expression !

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Renée]

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[Ethale Captor]

Amazing. One of the best writes I have read. I love the emotion packed into this small piece.

[Tarry Franck]

Wow - thank you so very much for the wonderful compliment

[Ethale Captor]

No problem.

[marie]

this is truly chilling, i pity the person who is at the brunt of this hate, but truly do you really believe the person deserves this? aren't we to forgive and treat them as we would a friend to heap the red hot coals upon their head?

[Tarry Franck]

Just had to let these feelings out - I believe in Karma - what comes around goes around - they will get what they deserve eventually.

[marie]

Well I believe in God but either way yes they will
Get their own

[Tarry Franck]

Yes they will

[Frieda P]

Wow, I don't know who this is intended for but you scared the bejaysus out of me...take heed! Powerful read!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, just glad it's not me!! ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

;-)

[PurpleQuartz]

Great work! Some very powerful words in here! I like it : D

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Wow! Such raw emotion!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you I felt that way when I was writing it.

[Ohhhwillow]

I'd love to hear of your inspiration for this peace, the atmosphere puzzles me with a tone of power as well as despair! I mean this in a positive light!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

This is so good!!!!!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome!

[quinfinn]

you got the wrong man , lady it wasn't me, i swear! glad i am not this person...

[Tarry Franck]

:) You always seem to put a smile one my face.

[quinfinn]

pretty amazing for a mere man, huh?

[Tarry Franck]

lol

[quinfinn]

;)