One More Moment

One More Moment

A Poem by Tarry Franck


Is it crazy of me
To place my knees to the ground
Wondering if the flowers 
Will still bloom
Through the surrounding
Reach for a cold, pale hand
They may believe I am
Disturbed, doomed
Am I?
Just because I want
To raise a dear friend
To have one more moment
One more kiss, one more hug
To be alone with her again.

© 2013 Tarry Franck


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You're not love. This is beautiful and breathtaking. I'm so sorry about your partner dear. I think it's sweet that you got matching tattoos and actually managed to stay together. It's a little funny because as soon as I saw that picture I thought it would make a gorgeous tattoo, and here you've already done that. Gorgeous write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much
Lina Grey

11 Years Ago

you're welcome :)



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wo tarry this is awesome

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You're not love. This is beautiful and breathtaking. I'm so sorry about your partner dear. I think it's sweet that you got matching tattoos and actually managed to stay together. It's a little funny because as soon as I saw that picture I thought it would make a gorgeous tattoo, and here you've already done that. Gorgeous write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much
Lina Grey

11 Years Ago

you're welcome :)
You say so much in so little. I can't even begin to imagine how hard it is to loose the love of your life. I'm so so sorry. This is very lovely however, and she would be proud, no doubt about that.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much
I am so tickled to be able to read your work ! Another Great piece of work ! love the knot..Celtic ?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Renée

11 Years Ago

( : I have that knot in earrings.. I am so sorry to hear about your partner .. Your poem is lovel.. read more
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much - it was an honor to have her in my life as long as I did
Renée

11 Years Ago

( :
Pure beauty. Who wouldn't want one last moment?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much
it's not crazy, and you are certainly not doomed. share all the love you can and hope it is returned in kind. there is no emptiness in that. there is much treasure in this write. you have hit the motherlode......well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your kindness
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

always, Tarry
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

;)
This is pure beauty lovely job but you are not doomed my dear

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

Your welcome!
I'm not sure how crazy that is, but this is batshyte crazy good. A few simple lines and you've given an entire scenario...doomed? No, you are not, keep writing like this and you'll keep blooming for sure.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Woo, you made my day! My pleasure to read you always dear friend.
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

That pleases more than you'll ever know.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

:-D

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Tarry Franck

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