Blossomed

Blossomed

A Poem by Tarry Franck


I cast my heart into the sky
Wondering what may fall
Laughter, tears
Thunder, lightning
Or nothing at all,
I cast my soul
Upon the ground
Wondering if what looked like weeds
~~Bloom~~
To my surprise my heart shed tears
On my souls weeds
And blossomed, beautifully indeed

© 2013 Tarry Franck


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nicely done tarry!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great pathetic fallacy here, really hits home, I suppose they call it a leap of faith for a reason friend!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

I couldn't agree more :) Thank you
One can only hope for something good when we put our hearts out there. Well said.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Lovely work ! I was always of the mind..weeds were only unwanted flowers...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear.
Renée

11 Years Ago

a pleasure
you never know what might happen, should you decide to let those "soul weeds" bloom. maybe you should nurture those blooms and make them flourish. before you know it you may have a garden full of beautiful flowers. awesome piece, Tarry!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you for this beautiful review
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

inspired by beauty...who knew?
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

;)
Beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

your welcome!
very nicely penned..although it has a big deal of feelings of disappointment, but you have really penned it so well..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you khalid
khalid

11 Years Ago

my pleasure..
Poignant read, I love this one...

'on my souls weeds' !!

You have blossomed within this piece...kudos Tarry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you my dear friend Frieda :)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Pleasure was mine Tarry ;-)

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Tarry Franck
Tarry Franck

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