My Huckleberry

Deep in the night

A conversation was held

Giving clues from one another

As if we were searching for gold

And maybe so, a treasure

That no other would know,

Sharing traits that were in common

Enjoying all the innuendos

That were given and taken

He set my heart afire, just blazing,

This man of words

You know who you are, my Huckleberry

You mesmerized me

You held my wings

Then set them free

Didn't know where the sky would turn

But it came to an end

However I believe this kindred soul

Will be a part of my life

Again and again.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

this is beautiful. a perfect homage to a loving friend. this man sounds as if he deeply touched you and left an invisible impression in your soul. perhaps you did the same to him, maybe you should ask him...sounds like a good person, this huckleberry. tell him he had better be good to you or quinfinn will be his johnny ringo.....very good poetry here, Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Yes, he has and maybe I do need to ask him. He's an amazing man. I'll relay the message...thanks Quin :)

[quinfinn]

welcome, m'lady

[beautiful dreamer]

nice! great poem tarry!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much :)

[Frieda P]

Ha, I was shocked when I opened this to see the pic...then delighted to read your lovely poetry. Huckleberry's are good to have, always need one around to lift your spirits and believe in you. This is a great one Tarry, thanks for sharing.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Frieda

[Trigorin]

Not bad, and you've gotten your message across very well. It's a little short, though, and I feel like there's still room to expand on this idea. Either way, though, this is still very good. Well done.

[Tarry Franck]

Oh, yes there is much more room to expand, if you only knew. Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

Doc Holiday was a great character. I like the description in the poem. Some people in history stood out. Had great personalities and adventures.
"You know who you are, my Huckleberry
You mesmerized me
You held my wings
Then set them free"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[A Soap Mess Stories]

A loving tribute to a loving friend who has touched your heart
Great poetry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[Lover Of Words]

Wow my my my so impressive!!! so amazing, A job well done my aunt

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks Kelsey

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome