Pollinating

Look into my green eyes

You can't tell me

They don't drop you

To your knees,

Caress my luscious hair

And tell me you don't want

To smell the essence I wear

The scent of amber

That gently haunts,

Don't tell me that you don't want to taste

The flavored gloss

Of my ample lips

And pull me closer

To your hips,

Don't tell me than when you touch my soft skin

You can just let go

Because I don't think you can

I seriously doubt so,

When you grasp these arms

And pull me close

I think our love

Will have blossomed,

A flower opening for

The first time

Being pollinated

Leaving nothing behind.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

whew, someone must have turned up the thermostat in this room...i got all funny and rubber legged there for a second. this is beautiful but it is also hot, hot, hot! dayum, girl! ever think about penning some eros? high scores all around. barkeep, give this lady whatever she's drinking, on me!

[Tarry Franck]

Hey baby, if you're buying, I'm flying. So glad you liked this - one of the best reviews I have ever received. Thank you, you're a delight.

[quinfinn]

you had me with green eyes and ample lips...oh, i am such a sucker for a woman's beauty. you're welcome.

[Tarry Franck]

Glad bec/I have green eyes LOL

[quinfinn]

tell me more......*sweat breaking on his brow*

[Tarry Franck]

Messages only now ;)

[beautiful dreamer]

wowsers tarry!

[Tarry Franck]

Yeah, job well done huh? LOL

[Renée]

This is hot ! You give plenty for our imaginations to play with without over doing it !
Very Sensual & well written !

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my new found friend :)

[Renée]

My Pleasure completely ! lol ( :

[Tarry Franck]

:)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Wow?! So romantic! Can't wait for my turn!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you - Hopefully you'll get ur turn real soon.

[Holly Mason]

written with a flare!put out the fire...love your nieces comment*)
thank you for sharing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Photo and words were amazing. A butterfly can give hope and energy by seeing the beauty in the colors. I like the use of the butterfly to make your point in the poem.
"The scent of amber
That gently haunts,
Don't tell me that you don't want to taste"
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

So glad you liked it - you know your reviews mean a lot to me.

[Trigorin]

Very sensual, but I do somewhat question the point of it. I mean, yes, there's a time and place for this sort of thing, but the image you've been portraying here (the flower analogy) seems very tacked-on on the end, and the whole piece leading up to that ending seems honestly somewhat vulgar.
There's no doubt that you know how to express yourself, and the writing in this piece is perfect from a technical standpoint. I'm just very doubtful of the tastefulness of this piece.

[Tarry Franck]

Maybe you should ask Quinfinn - he understood it quite well.

[Tarry Franck]

And so did the others...

[quinfinn]

i thought this demonstrated extremely good taste, as profoundly erotic as it is.

[Lover Of Words]

Well dang my aunt got her steam on tonight Where is the water hose when you need one!!!!! LOL nice

[Tarry Franck]

LMBO ! Thanks girly :)

[Frieda P]

LMAO!!!

[Lover Of Words]

LOL my pleasure NIce one!!!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks

[Lover Of Words]

And laugh it up Frieda!! LOL

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome

[Frieda P]

They do need to get a cold shower for the WC ha

[Tarry Franck]

Feels too good right now, I'm quite enjoying it LOL

[Frieda P]

Oh gawd!!

[Lover Of Words]

Oh goodness

[C.C. Marx]

Whew that was intense Amiga, muy caliente!!! But at the same time , there was also a softness to it, nicelybpenned

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much

[C.C. Marx]

My pleasure as always

[Frieda P]

Holy............I just lit up. This really winds you up to the very last drop. So suggestive, smooth and erotic, it's definitely your best to date, in my humble opinion. Love this Tarry. Favorite.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, it was certainly good for me. ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

:)))))