Strong Spirit

Still fresh on our minds

Our baby, we want to wrap our arms

Around you so tight

And never let go

Through the day

Through the night,

You suffered and it's hard

For us to live with that

We were not there

When it was your time to part,

You should have been with

Your Mom, your Dad

And we are so apologetic

For our foolishness

And still very sad,

Unfortunately we can not

Make up for that

Why did we do such wrong

It was not fair to you

But we were well informed

That even though you suffered

Your spirit remained strong,

That's the Ace we know

You lived up to your name

Number one in our lives

You proved it 

Over and over again

Our lives without you

Shall never be the same,

We will eventually find

Such strength like you had

'Til the very end

Because we will embrace

All those happy memories

Instead of all the sad.

Reviews

[Rufus "Mr Blaque" Lacy,..]

This was a beautiful piece directed towards a loving friend/family member/pet.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much dear.

[char]

A beautiful tribute to a much loved member of the family. I'm glad you asked me to read this. This is awesome. Ace must have been a very awesome and lovely companion.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much. He was a wonderful companion and miss him so much!

[quinfinn]

dogs are truly part of the family. to think of them as anything less is to "own a pet" for sport and such. very touching and compelling write.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much quin

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Such warm and fond memories ......

[Tarry Franck]

yes, thank you

[Frieda P]

Tugs at the heartstrings, touching write for your loving departed friend.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear friend

[Lover Of Words]

Such a sweet write! Even though i read this one already... SO GOOD... and Ace is looking down at you not wanting you to be sad! :) Love this

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks dear and I'm sure he is and know he wouldn't.

[Tarry Franck]

no he wouldn't not "know" lol

[Lover Of Words]

LOL

[Holly Mason]

I am so sorry for your loss
gosh just so sorry may your family heal and love again
thank you for sharing a hard personal loss

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much for your kind words. We will heal - will just take some time. First my Father in October and now my baby. Will take time, I know you're so right.

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm sorry for your lost. Our animals make us laugh and there are our friends. I agree with your thoughts in the poem. We must remember the good times.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Coyote. That was my kid I lost - can't have any kids so that WAS my baby boy.

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm sorry for the lost of a child. Our children become part of us forever after we hold them one time.

[beautiful dreamer]

what a beautiful poem for your baby great write tarry

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much - beautiful :)