Treasured

Treasured

A Poem by Tarry Franck

I entered a dream last night
A haunting from my past
For an addiction
That I could not find,
My body convulsed
In the worst pain
I've ever felt
But you came along
And eased that ache
It was pure pleasure
That you gave,
You held nothing back
To my surprise
And I woke
With you holding me tightly
As if I were your treasure
By your side.

© 2013 Tarry Franck


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Old wounds find you in the dark hours of life... The pain in the soul is worse than any pain the body could withstand. "pure pleasure" is way of life and not a moment or a feeling, but I agree it is a gift.
Stay in that comfort. Live in it.

one correction... "As if *I* were your treasure"

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear. Correction made...thank you for pointing that out :)



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nicely done miss tarry very well written

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear
What a lovely picture you have created with these thoughts and words

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
A very good ending to the powerful poem. I like the strong description leading the reader to the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Coyote - glad you enjoyed it so much - I'm honored :)
So touching ...n.n

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you Starrleena
Old wounds find you in the dark hours of life... The pain in the soul is worse than any pain the body could withstand. "pure pleasure" is way of life and not a moment or a feeling, but I agree it is a gift.
Stay in that comfort. Live in it.

one correction... "As if *I* were your treasure"

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear. Correction made...thank you for pointing that out :)
what a wonderful way to awake from a wonderful dream! this is exquisite!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Just a part of my past. Didn't happen last night like I would love for it to.
Well isnt this something... I am WoWed... I love this...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

Your welcome
Wouldn't that be nice if the 'good' dreams came true, a sense of whimsy and longing in this one. Love the thought of this.

You have 2 'if's'



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Yes, it would - Thank you Frieda and thanks for pointing that out to me. Correction made :)

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Added on February 17, 2013
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Tarry Franck
Tarry Franck

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