Light Of My Day

You lighten my day

And you don't even know

With just the words you say,

You're not completely aware

Of what all you do

And not sure you know

How much I care,

Even though I tell you all the time

Does it make a difference

Between you and I...

I'm hoping one day

The true words I speak

Will thoroughly break through

And I will know for sure

You love me as much as I love you.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of hope and love. Love is what we need and what we should be. I like the flow of thoughts and the hopeful ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Sounds like what my boyfriend is always telling me. Maybe I should listen to his words. Great work.

[Tarry Franck]

You most certainly should. Sounds like he has a great woman!

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Awwww thank you my dear friend

[Tarry Franck]

You're quite welcomed :)

[Frieda P]

Short and sweet, saying a whole helluva lot. Like this one heaps, can be related to so much. I'll twist into you're speaking to all poets, that's my take, and I'm sticking to it. ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you Frieda ;-)

[quinfinn]

wonderful goals to hope for and beautifully written. i do know this feeling, very well. you emote quite wonderfully.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[quinfinn]

you're welcome, Tarry

[Lover Of Words]

Beautiful words... Heart felt.... Nicely done

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Lover Of Words]

Its my pleasure