Memories of Ace

You were the kid

We could never have

The love of our lives

And now we're so sad,

Your departure we knew

Was going to come

But never, never this soon,

We remember when you were just a pup

And Daddy could carry you

Around in his pocket

But that didn't last very long

Because so fast you grew up,

We taught you so many things

How to balance a treat

On your nose

Stay steady and until we told you so,

Pop it up and then chew it

Then we graduated to a ball

Your obsession with them

And socks were so unreal

Sometimes we would have to hide

Just to keep you calm at times

That was the deal,

I recall one evening

Us going to a casino

When we were done playing

We went to a restaurant

And I had a strange feeling,

I asked Daddy

If we could just go home

Of course we headed that way

When we walked through the door

The pot of food I left on the stove

However was still there

But it was empty

And the burner was on low

And the spoon was in the middle of the floor,

With such an innocent look on that face

We could not help

But extend such love

For then we realized

You were smarter than we

Had given you credit for,

And the talent began to grow

We had moved to another location

And there was not a refrigerator

So the great brother that I have

Gave us a tiny one to cool our things in

I came home one day and all the ham

And cheese packages were scattered

All over the kitchen,

Hmmm I wondered who it could have been

We had to duct tape the door

So you were unable

To open from the floor,

I remember all the times

We held you tightly

Through your epileptic seizures

And you would cry

And we cried along with you

Baby you were so smart 

And we dearly miss you

In the end we know you went blind

And the epileptic seizures were hard 

For all to endure,

But sweetie we're so glad you didn't

Pass away in the elements

You passed in a loving home

I regret that Daddy and I could not be there

For us to hold you through it all

But we know you are in heaven

And your mom accepted you

With open paws.

Author's Note

Adding his pic, screwed up the style it was written. Sorry guys!

Reviews

[quinfinn]

yes, i remember many scenarios like these with my pets, and when they misbehaved like bad children i spanked them like bad children and they learned not to "help themselves" to my stuff, even though they were smart enough to do it. i suffered with them when they suffered, because i dearly loved them as family members. now, i am reluctant to have a pet because they simply don't live long enough not to break your heart. this write brought all those memories crashing back to me like a ton of bricks from an old attic....well done.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you - I have 2 more pets - Ace's brother, Ozzy, and another dog named TJ. After these pass, there will be no others. I couldn't handle the death of Ace and still having sad moments. When these pass, no more for me. I can't handle the hurt my kids bring. btw "like a ton of bricks from an old attic" sorry your memories were brought back of these days but I love that line. & thank you

[Ohhhwillow]

In no way was this "screwed up"! Funny how we can connect with creatures who can't speak a word. Perhaps because of their eternal liveliness and loyalty. Like any person, their memories last a lifetime. Quite brilliant Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Willow - Always looking forward to your reviews. I believe I've said it before they uplift me.

[Ohhhwillow]

I'm really glad they have such an effect on you

[Tarry Franck]

:)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Such lovely memories ....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you - I miss him so much

[Lover Of Words]

Defentally touched my heart for sure Because of how old my baby Willie is... I know his day is going too come really soon... Ace is found his place in your heart now dear aunt of mine. This touches all of us doggy lovers. As a family member of yours I know that you are taking this hard.. But do you see how great of a writer you are.. This is so beautiful

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much and thank you being by my side even though I've been a bit distant right now...but you keep reaching out and it is helping whether you believe it or not. I love you dear.

[Lover Of Words]

I am not going to stop doing what i do. You dont have to worry about that.. I will always be by your side no matter what I love you too

[Tarry Franck]

:)

[Lover Of Words]

:)

[Lover Of Words]

You are the best

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you sweetie

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome

[Margarette]

Oh, what sadness and pain this poem has struck my heart. I remembered thosefeelings when I've had my labrador and he died of cardiac failure. I shouldn't have fed him with so much food, thinking that fat dogs are cute. Anyway, this poem has reached out to me and I can feel your sentiments flowing on this one. Very detailed and vivid imagery from a painful situation. I hope your pup will be peaceful above. Thanks for sharing!

[Tarry Franck]

Sorry for your loss dear. Thank you for the compliments on the poem. He is certainly dearly missed. Thank you for reviewing my friend.

[C.C. Marx]

I love my dog dearly and remember when my old one died. I was 7, I was heartbroken and cried for days. I'm sorry for your loss, I understand the pain!!! Great job

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for the understanding and I'm sorry for your loss as well. Thank you for your compliment on my poem.

[C.C. Marx]

My pleasure!!!

[beautiful dreamer]

oh how sad and pretty and i am sorry for the lost of your beloved part of your family

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much sweetie

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad and beautiful poem. Our animals are our friends and we do miss them when they are gone. Thank you for the poem and the memory.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Frieda P]

'With open paws' :(

I lost my darling pug Luna not so long ago, this brought a tear to my eyes.

[Tarry Franck]

Sorry for your loss - I'm still shedding tears.

[Frieda P]

Do they do become an integral part of our lives and family...so sad, sorry Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my dear friend Frieda

[David Scott]

Our pets become a part of the fabric of our lives even more than human family at times. I am touched by your poem and the joy and suffering that you disclosed here.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you - still shedding tears!