Sweet Surrender

Haven't heard from you

In so many days

I'm beginning to wonder

If I was just a phase,

Maybe you were not

Getting the attention

You needed

Maybe you felt

The need for greed,

One was not enough

So you reached out

For another,

You knew I would fall

Drop everything

At your beck and call,

And the sad thing is

That I love you so

I would do it all over again

Anything to see you face to face

To feel your embrace

And to leave you with my trace.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

how fickle and fleeting are the nuances of love. it seems we learn the same lessons over and over again in this life. i like the gentle way you presented your doubt and pain in this wonderful piece. well done.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much for understanding :)

[OTownPete]

It hurts to know that your love is not enough. Your friend in words, Pete

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for reviewing - Just feels like it's hanging in the balance right now.

[Margarette]

Aw, don't blame yourself for his mistakes. It's just his loss. Then again, love is stronger than what the body can do. The poem speaks of volumes of despair and loneliness. I hope your feelings will be returned soon.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much :)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

sad and simulating, I guess everybody can relate to it
good one

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[marie]

such a sad write... this poor soul that it characterized in these words one can only pity them, but all the same wish them well, and for some of us well, we understand their pain.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[marie]

no problem i enjoyed it:)

[Tarry Franck]

Glad you did

[marie]

:)

[David Scott]

Ah... Too familiar for many of us I think. Great capture in a few words.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my friend

[Dalia]

I can relate to that, it touched my heart, you've got a smooth style of writing
well-penned :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much :)

[Perri]

May you felt=maybe you felt?
Always sucks to love someone who doesn't love you back, think you've captured it effectively and simplistically, that love and hurt.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear!
Thanks for the typo information

[Leigh]

I can feel the yearning and the pain of waiting and the unknowing, very well written

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[Leigh]

You are very very welcome

[A Soap Mess Stories]

wonderfully and well penned....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear