One With Nature

The scent of the moist air

Approaches the night

So I, the courageous person that I am

Shed my clothes

And upon the earth

Rest my head,

With a soft touch

The air caressed my every curve

With a gentle kiss

The rain caressed my wholesome lips

And calmed my very nerve,

One with nature

Now I feel I am

Off in the distance I watched

My soul as it ran.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

OMG...I love, love, love this one. It's so concise and elegant. That pic is amazing and really adds to the unique quality of this work. Did i say I love this? Definite favorite of mine...Brava!!

'Off in the distance I watched my soul as it ran.' *sigh*

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much Frieda - you made my day and I'm usually grumpy in the morning so you've helped a great deal!!! :))))))

[Frieda P]

haha I'm a grump too...so your poem did it for me! ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

Well a favor for the both of us - What a wonderful morning it has been!

[Frieda P]

:-)

[David Scott]

"Off in the distance I watched
My soul as it ran."
You brought me back to a childhood memory.
Wonderful.

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks makes me happy - childhood memory...nothing like bringing back the past especially if it's a good one.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Good to fall into Nature and blend in with her. I like the desire and the purpose of the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my dear friend

[Ahmad Cox]

Such amazing and wonderful connection to nature and its sensual healing energies

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Beautiful.....simply beautiful....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for you kind words

[Leigh]

Love the ending it could represent so many different things, like death or a return to being an animal or being consumed by natures power

[Tarry Franck]

thank you very much

[luviva]

ohhhh
this is such a beautiful poem!!
thanxx for sharing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much!

[Margarette]

Now that Earth Day is fast approaching with only a little more than a month, this poem will be the voice of environmentalists and ecologist. I'm a biologist so I'm glad that you put it into words. Thanks for sharing!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

Love it :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome!!!!