Echoes

There's a familiar sound

Rustling in the wind

A passionate sound

That lures me in,

It echoes through my heart

Wraps around my soul

It tears me apart

Yet leaves me whole

Reviews

[marie]

lovely:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[marie]

no problem:)

[David Scott]

Now this poem read like a sweet treat. I loved the poem.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you sooooo much :)

[Deron Alexis]

infatuation i'm guessing good metaphor well done

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[beautiful dreamer]

short and straight to the point but still leaves you analyzing. great write

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[Ahmad Cox]

Such beautiful connection to that inner strength and calm.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[A Soap Mess Stories]

such a beautiful simple poem....

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks

[C.C. Marx]

A pretty little poem, very beautiful, nicely done!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear

[C.C. Marx]

my pleasure of course Tarry :)

[Frieda P]

Could be love, or lust....or you need chocolate really badly. Kidding aside, it's loverly....like it a lot. Nice, concise, and to the point. Lots of emotion packed into that stanza. Kudos.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much my dear friend :)

[Frieda P]

You know the pleasure is always mine ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

:)

[Margarette]

Sorry but I can't particularly what 'echoes through my heart' means. I think I already have my general assumption on the whole piece. Is someone calling another resulting in the reverbation towards the person? A well-written piece!

[Tarry Franck]

Yes, you got it :)

[Lover Of Words]

You get more and more breathtakingly good everytime I read a new one! A fan for life!! Speechless!

[Tarry Franck]

thank you

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome!!!!! :)))))