Kingdom of Heaven

Since you've moved on

To a better place

We're not aware

If you know how much

You are truly missed

And how many of us truly cared,

Bits and pieces of your belongings

Are slowly being given away

All the tears that flow

As each piece moves on to its

Rightful place,

We do this because it's what you wanted

And even though it's hard to do it

We understand but it's hard to let go

But we are abiding by your wish,

Mom is really having a rough time

Since you've been gone

Please grant me one wish, one prayer

Please never leave her alone,

She needs to know you are around

From time to time

And I know THAT you will do

From the bottom of my heart

To The Kingdom Of Heaven

I graciously thank you.

Reviews

[Ahmad Cox]

Such emotion and strength and honesty in this wonderfully moving poem.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for such kind words

[A Soap Mess Stories]

such a grieving piece...its hard when a loved one passes on...

[Tarry Franck]

Yes indeed it is!!! :(

[Frieda P]

Hauntingly emotive....lots of personal anguish at stake here. I felt this one in my bones.

[Tarry Franck]

Yes, my step-father past away on Oct. 15th so it's been difficult as I'm sure you know what that's like but in a different manner. Giving his things away is hard to do but the right thing to go. He stipulated who get what.

[Margarette]

This is such a heartwarming poem and your provocative thoughts are greatly felt by any reader. A beautiful prayer from a thoughtful soul. Thanks for sharing!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you sooooo much

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Quite sensational! I feel its much personal. However, I believe if you worked a little more on it and gave it a meter or rhyme it would be ultra awesome

[Tarry Franck]

Care to help - I'm all eyes :) Just message me :)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Well, I believe no one should write a poem but one poet, otherwise, its not creativity, its a marred shadow of two, unholy and undone...
try yourself, by your emotions, then message me what you did :)

[Tarry Franck]

will do when I have more time ;)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

best of luck

[Lover Of Words]

ahh this one was a tough one to read eyes watering as i realize who this is about...but yet this is very good.... ahhhh....

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks - I cried the whole time I wrote it!!! That's why I haven't responded to your texts but will shortly. Have to charge battery too. But you can still text.

[Lover Of Words]

Its okay! I understand! Great poem!