Joyous King

In dream twilight

I long for the love

Of my Joyous King

I can feel the warmth

Of your breath

Upon my neck,

When we sleep side by side

And when you turn to caress

I feel your warm naked body

Against mine

There's a joy that

Fills me inside

The alarm goes off at dawn

You're getting dressed for the day

I glance at you

As if a breath of fresh air swept through,

Like sunbeam came along

Before the morning coffee

You apply that alluring cologne,

It permeates the air

And the desires within

Passionately gives in

I didn't want that moment to end,

Your lunch packed and ready to go

And it's too hard to say by

Even though I know you're coming home

The same time

You come home every night,

With a home cooked meal

And a clean house

And our dogs excited for you to see

Their new tricks mama taught them

I want that life again

And with you only

I can only pray

When all is said and done

You will feel the same

From Queen to King

That's what I want

Oh so desperately.

Reviews

[luviva]

WOW, YOU EXPRESSED the true love and desire for him well in this poem..
but the sad thing is that every sweet moment always comes to an end!!
its so annoying mainly those morning breaks... when you were still feeling the warmth permeate from him! when he leaves you feel like a naked person..
real good write

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[David Scott]

An almost Biblical tone... Like king Solomon wrote...
I like the feel of this request for connection.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much

[Ahmad Cox]

Very personable and very beautiful write. I appreciate your honesty of emotions

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for such kind words

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Such a desperate need I hope get...I could feel the desperation....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[quinfinn]

you took me to a place i have dreamed of for years, one that is long gone and never to return. how very vividly you painted the portrait of a happy life with someone who means the whole world to you and all your surroundings, including the family pets.....that is inclusive without being ridiculous....very well written !

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you sooooooo very much! You just made my day ~~ Now I can smile again :)))

[Lover Of Words]

Oh what a lovely King and Queen :))))) I love how you included my few words in there it made it pop so much more and made it a great read this is amazing nicely done :)

[Tarry Franck]

Yes those helped a great deal - don't know I would do without you. My apologies for not including that in the authors notes. I'm such in a rush to find the perfect picture I forget. Again I'm sorry. Oh Yeah Thanks again :)

[Lover Of Words]

Hahaha no worries i love the picture by the way! No need too be sorry!! I came up with that half asleep lol i didnt know it was that good hahaha

[Tarry Franck]

Well you do now - I fell in love with that pic. Reminds me of me and him.

[Lover Of Words]

I love the picture

[Frieda P]

Delightfully tragic read. Filled with such anticipation in the beginning, begging for that wondrous life to be repeated at the end...it takes me on a roller coaster ride. Very personal message in this, one I think many of us can relate to....charming pic by the way! ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[Frieda P]

Pleasure was all mine, I assure you. :-)