Thoughts Of You

Like the new moon

That doesn't light the sky

I can still follow the path

By the stars that shine,

What I wouldn't do

To hold you so much

Even if it was monitored

And I could only get one touch

That would be enough

Oh what the hell

I have no reason to lie

They wouldn't be able 

To peel me off of you

It would probably take the jaws of life,

However, just the slightest warmth

Of your embrace gets me through the cold

Within your arms

The passionate kiss

Helps me get through

The days and nights that are so long.

Reviews

[marie]

this is beautiful:) i love it.. reminds me of my boyfriend:)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[marie]

:)

[Ahmad Cox]

Aww. So passionate and beautiful. I love this poem.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you sweetie :)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

So tragic having to wait for that special love...

[Tarry Franck]

But I'm keeping fingers crossed over my heart that it will be worth it all.

[Frieda P]

The 'monitored' part threw me in this one...the rest is longing and a love that is out of your grasp. Hmmm....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

I take it, you're not giving up that info! ;-)

[David Scott]

Sounds like your missing a lover gone to war or in prison. It is good to see the warmth of your own heart as a love that can still warm you. I like the thought and the read was smooth.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much ;)

[C.C. Marx]

Well you find that special someone, you just know, no jaws of life can ever hold you back :) nicely written

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I know what it's like to feel this way about someone, written wonderfully Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

I know you do and thank you

[luviva]

wow..
so lovable and the LOVE u gt for your lover is just filled to overflowing in here.!!
real good

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much. I always look forward to your reviews

[luviva]

ohh ok.. i will keep them constant and make it apoint to checxk you out!!
;)

[Tarry Franck]

You're so kind but you don't have to feel like you have to.

[luviva]

no, no absolutely not!! u r a great writer and your work needs credit!!
i read it becaues it lures me in...! if u knw wt i mean.

[Tarry Franck]

That's very kind of you

[Lover Of Words]

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE.... amazing message of love writen here! Great job my aunt

[Tarry Franck]

thank you dearest niece of mine :))) {{{HUGS}}}

[Lover Of Words]

:))))) {{{{HUGS}}}} right back at you!!