Evil Bound

The hounds of hell

Are running after me

Because I have something

The damned want so desperately

The Book of Shadows

That evil should never see,

For they would use it

Negatively against whomever

They wish,

My guess would be me first

Since I have it and doing

The best to let no harm

Get in the way

We Pagan's only use it for charm,

And many other things

But harm none is what we do

Dark spells we do not cast

So the hounds of hell can

Keep chasing me

But soon what is long overdue,

An incantation we performed

For the hounds to protect us

I lured them in and complete the circle

We have just transformed them

To be under our command

And never have to suffer

Under the evil of the crack whipping hands,

And if they come to look for them

We are protected now

The hounds will retaliate

Protect us from the evil

What they thought was still his

Then realized they were unable

To get the hounds to come hither

He was unable to cross the surfaced circle

A veil between us and them

If you will

Thanks to the God and Goddess

For helping us not allowing them

To The Book of Shadows

Yet again.

Reviews

[Margarette]

This is a good spirited view on the battle between darkness and light. You portrayed a narrative and simplistic poem out of it and the ending is appropriately written. Until the next time that darkness will soon try to devise evil schemes in order to win. Thanks for sharing!

[Tarry Franck]

Yes indeed the evil schemes will continue. Thank you for viewing :)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Love the comparison between good and evil and the struggle not to be quenched in it....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[luviva]

ok.. you did a pretty good job with this poem.
it is a sensitive topic and one that is catchy to the teenagers.
i suggest you make a book out of it..
what do u say?

[Frieda P]

Book of Shadows, sounds like dangerous reading indeed. Kind of reminds me a dreamlike medieval times tale...beware. Nice one.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Ahmad Cox]

Epic tale and poem. I really liked this one. It made me happy.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

nice tale and recite
liked the idea

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

This is amazing your writing really does inspire me!!! Great job :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome!!

[David Scott]

Feels like a song from a magical world...
Needs a book around it.
Great feel to the write.
Well done.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my dear friend :)

[Rob Santana]

Magickal!! Keep it safe as I do mine. I really like this piece.

[Tarry Franck]

Been waiting to hear from you! I was hoping you would like it!!!! :)

[Rob Santana]

This piece is great. Your description of practicing the craft was excellent.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much! I take a bow ;)