Mother Nature

Deep in the valley

When thunder roars

It stirs my spirit

In so many ways

I dance in the rain

It cleanses me

A purification of all my shame,

Mother Nature

Lending a helping hand

And grateful of her abilities

I most certainly am,

I bask in the elements

While others hide

I prefer riding the thoroughbred outdoors

Than staying near the warm hearth

They can't keep my spirit

From taking flight,

I'm ready to implode

My emotions run about

They seem to want to explode,

Such a lucid landscape

The allure of it is overwhelming

Breath taking if you will

An artistic view

And yet my spirit still brewing,

Walking down the path thinking

This I would love to own

This great divine

A place to call home,

A place where my spirit can soar

No matter how long

Before I'm too old

And no longer be able to embrace 

The land and the shore.

Reviews

[David Scott]

We all feel the embrace of our "Mother" in our won way. i enjoyed feeling your experience here today. Your write was easy to get lost in and gave me the urge to go out and explore!
My time in nature has been too little of late...
Thank you for the visual.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[beautiful dreamer]

wow. i love nature. well i should i live smack dab in the middle of the woods. beautiful poem.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[beautiful dreamer]

your very welcome dear friend

[Tarry Franck]

:)

[luviva]

wow..
this really appreceates the beauty of nature and love how you structured and worded... it just flows!!
and yo ryt, u should enjoy it before you are too old to embrace it..
loved the last paragraph
gr8 work

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

I am in pure amazement...Even though i shouldnt be because i know how you write but i am Jaw dropping amazing loved it

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Lover Of Words]

Not a problem dear it was my pleasure